在你的語法達到一定層次之后，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番!
在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞匯取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什么變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞匯!給你打個比方吧，很多想到“許多”就用many，但是你別忘了many a ;handsome;massive，innumerable，a multitude of ;很多人想到“專家”就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅長”這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上!
【范文一：The Popularity of Mandarin】
In China, there is no doubt that English is very important, because it has been the indispensable subject for students to learn since they go to school. As our economy develops so fast and our country plays the more and more important role in the world, a lot of foreigners have started to learn mandarin. There is even a big TV show for foreigners to compete to be the one who speaks mandarin best. I have watched the show, I am so impressed that the foreigners can speak mandarin so well, for mandarin is such difficult to learn. My foreign teachers told me that so many people in their countries wanted to know more about China and they were interested in our culture. The popularity of mandarin shows that our country has become stronger. We should be proud of that.
Recently, it has been reported that a college student went to Guangzhou for travel, but she missed, finally, the policeman found her body. It is so terrible, this incident warns people to protect themselves, especially for the girls. First, we’d better travel with friends. Traveling alone is very popular among the young people, because they are independent and chase for freedom, so they like to go without friends. Then they are easily becoming the gangster’s targets. Therefore, having someone accompany not only can share the opinion, but also can be safe. Second, it is better not to go to the place which is dark and less people. The bad guys like to choose this place because they will not be noticed and are easy to do the criminal things. We need to learn to protect ourselves, life is precious.